I'd have to say that I really like your article "
Gorsche, the Athletic Machine" it was the best one by far. I really enjoyed how it talked about myself, and some of my accomplishments. Now, onto the design of your newsletter, it was somewhat dull to say the least, but I
definitely see room for
improvement. Fozzy- Thanks foor telling me to join sea cadets cant wait to do pushs up. I like the parts of your newsletter where you add a little bam bam to it. it is the funiest one I read. -Dalton
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